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Elegant, Eloquent, Aliquant by ~TheShun:iconTheShun:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


My Spine hurts and My Soul cries.
Is this Pain True?
I don’t mean to Flail.
I mean to Fly.
Soar beyond this.
Reap the Rewards and Benefits.
Without the Work.
My Tapestry is the Same.
©2007-2008 ~TheShun
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Submitted: Dec 19, 2007
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~Impbeast:iconImpbeast: Jan 7, 2008, 12:59:07 AM
Nice
This time I have no explanation for it
I want to try tho.

a pang not for economical satisfaction but for
artistic recognition by peers or experts
with real talent to make it all worth while
while feeling like you have to run around
working your ass of for a bit of fleeting fame

I can be wrong but this is a piece I can relate to.
My reason for failure however is for being a jerk
who forgot how having great friends like you is
~TheShun:iconTheShun: Jan 23, 2008, 8:35:48 PM
Yay! This has a very meaningful tone for me, and me alone. Whatever you get out of this one, will not be the intention. I think there's something to be said in these types of works: meaning can be found in anything. It's great though. Thank you very much!

Thane
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~Impbeast:iconImpbeast: Mar 21, 2008, 11:51:32 PM
woo
secret meaning? well thems the best ones
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